Thursday, April 12, 2018


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In the beginning there was a swing bridge.
We went to the docks where the boats are tied up,(yacht club).
The yacht club is where we were  going to see were the old swing bridge was.
When we got there we did not see the bridge Ms Ashley was talking to us about the bridges, we could not see the swing bridge.
The old swing bridge made a sound effect like a boiling jug.
No one could not cross for a while because it was unsafe for the cars to cross,so they had to build another bridge that was strong to hold the heavy packages so the bridge won't collapse into the Tamaki River.

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Two weeks ago there was a collapsing foot bridge accident on a 8 lane highway in America close to Miami.
There was survivors that called for help for emergency.
The helicopter was making too much noise and the emergency people couldn't hear the people who were screaming for help under the debris.

1 comment:

  1. Keep up this high standard of learning. Just proof read those capitals at the beginning of sentences and the random ones that should not be there.